Thursday, July 15, 2010

Definition Paragraph "Self-esteem" page119 Ms. Kristi

Self-Esteem is a term which is treated especialy in psychology to acquaint a person’s universal quality like personification of ourselves. The respect for ourselves is very important. Having self-respect,everyone is able to confront the challenges of entire lifetime. Self-esteem is built up when we have confidence and satisfaction in ourselves. This means a good self-esteem indicate a good feeling about ourselves, if we do not feel good about ourselves, then this means we possess a low self-esteem. So that, having a low self-esteem we feel badly about ourselves. Obviously, we have no self-respect, and think things like we look horrible, and no one likes us. We always want to have a good self-esteem; a good self-esteem will help us getting further in entire our life. But,there is a fact when we possess a self-esteem that is too high it also affects very badly to us because, we look at ourselves more values than others have. So in this case we've overvalued ourselves against the others.
As conclusion,the term "Self-esteem" must build up conform to the cultivation of the person's universal quality.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Edmund--
    You forgot 'an'
    'challenges of an entire lifetime!'

    look at your verb 'indicate'--do you see any problems there? Read it aloud. Also, you need to put a period in that sentence rather than a comma.
    --'will help us IN getting further in OUR entire life'

    --I also see a comma error (after an introductory phrase!)

    :-) Kristi
    8/10

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